(pedulikkan tatabahasa!) hahaha
A prison dragged from his bed...
entwined with a fiery chain,
brought there by black old man,
crawled over prickly floor.
The guard cannot compromise him,
from slaughtering his head,
without any reason,
world blame him, no it wasn't!
Blood spread around his neck,
he cannot run~that's for sure,
spreading out his trachea,
found himself no eyes.
Brother, please wake up him,
from a frightening nightmare,
i see him can't breath,
from a dream of how he die!
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the idea, the issue yg u try tulis bagus although grammar is not really ur main concern. tapi u bagus laa in writing poetry. ada bakat. keep it up ye.
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